Daniel Wells - The Mill Letters
The courthouse basement smelled of mildew and dying secrets. Vera Hutchins pulled another deed folder from the metal filing cabinet, her fingers coming away dusty with the residue of decades. Above her, the floorboards creaked as Deputy Morrison walked his rounds, but down here in the records room, she might as well have been buried alive with the county’s paper ghosts.
The folder marked “Blackwater Mill - 1947” felt heavier than it should. Inside, wedged between the insurance documents and property transfers, a letter had been folded so many times the creases had worn white.
“My darling Thorne,” it began in faded blue ink. “The mill stands like a cancer on our future. You know what must be done.”
Vera’s hands trembled. The signature read “Forever yours, Constance Hutchins.”
Her great-aunt Constance. The woman whose inheritance had bought Vera’s house, put her through college, given her this quiet life among the files and forgotten histories of Millhaven County. She read on.
“When the mill burns, we’ll be free. Thomas will never know it was us. Three thousand dollars from Hartford Insurance will buy us passage to New Orleans, maybe California. Just be certain about the night watchman’s schedule.”
Thomas. Vera’s great-uncle, Constance’s husband who’d died in the mill fire. The tragedy that had made Constance a wealthy widow.
The basement’s single fluorescent light flickered, casting dancing shadows across the letter. Vera looked for a date. September 15th, 1947. The mill had burned on September 23rd.
She dug deeper into the folder. More letters, all from Constance to someone named Thorne. Plans sketched in passionate whispers. Times and dates. Guard rotations. Exit strategies.
“The workers’ quarters will be empty by midnight,” one letter promised. “I checked with the foreman. Only Thomas will be there, doing his monthly inventory.”
Only Thomas would be there. But three men had died that night. The newspaper clipping was right there in the file, yellow and brittle. Thomas Hutchins, 34. Miguel Santos, 19. Robert Clay, 42. All found in the mill’s collapsed eastern wing.
Vera’s inheritance. Her comfortable life. Built on ashes and lies.
She was still staring at the letters when her phone rang. The sound echoed off the concrete walls like a gunshot.
“County Records, this is Vera.”
“Miss Hutchins? My name is Marcus Thorne. I believe our families share some history.”
The name hit her like cold water. She looked down at the letters scattered across her desk.
“I’m sorry, could you repeat that?”
“Marcus Thorne. My grandfather knew your great-aunt, I think. I’ve been researching genealogy records, and I came across some interesting connections. I was wondering if we might correspond about it. I’m something of a history enthusiast.”
His voice was warm, educated. A slight Southern accent, but refined. Nothing threatening in it.
“What kind of connections?”
“Well, that’s what I’d like to explore with you, if you’re willing. I think our families were more intertwined than either of us knew. Would you be interested in exchanging letters? I know it’s old-fashioned, but there’s something about handwritten correspondence that email just can’t capture.”
Vera looked at Constance’s letters, spread before her like evidence of a crime.
“Yes,” she heard herself say. “I think I’d like that very much.”
Marcus Thorne’s first letter arrived three days later, written on cream-colored paper in careful script. Vera found it waiting on her kitchen table when she got home from work, slipped under her door while she’d been cataloging water-damaged marriage certificates in the basement.
“Dear Vera,” it began. “I hope you’ll forgive the presumption of writing so soon, but I find myself drawn to our shared mystery. My grandfather spoke often of Millhaven in his final years, always with a strange mixture of fondness and regret.”
She poured herself a glass of sweet tea and settled into her grandmother’s rocking chair by the window. Outside, the September heat shimmered off the asphalt like liquid mercury.
“He mentioned a woman named Constance more than once. Always said she was the most beautiful creature he’d ever seen, with eyes like spring water and a laugh that could make a man forget his own name. But there was sadness in how he spoke of her, as if something had gone terribly wrong between them.”
Vera thought of the letters hidden in her bedroom drawer. Beautiful Constance, plotting murder in passionate prose. She’d read them so many times she’d memorized whole passages.
“I’m enclosing a photograph I found among his effects. Perhaps you’ll recognize the woman standing beside him.”
The photograph was black and white, slightly blurred. A tall man in suspenders stood next to a woman in a white dress. Even through the grain and age of the image, Vera could see the resemblance to her own face in the woman’s sharp cheekbones and dark eyes.
Constance. And presumably his grandfather, the Thorne who’d helped plan the mill fire.
“I must confess, Vera, that seeing your name in those genealogy records felt like fate. Here I am, alone with these fragments of the past, and suddenly there’s someone who might help me piece them together. Do you ever feel like you’re living in the shadow of stories you don’t fully understand?”
She did. Especially now, with Constance’s letters burning in her memory like brands.
“I find myself hoping this correspondence might bloom into something meaningful. Not just historical research, but genuine connection. In this age of instant everything, there’s something profound about the deliberate act of putting pen to paper, sealing an envelope, trusting the postal service with your thoughts.”
The letter was signed “With growing anticipation, Marcus.”
A phone number was written at the bottom, but somehow Vera knew she wouldn’t call it. He was right about letters. There was something about the weight of paper, the permanence of ink, that made words matter more.
That night, she sat at her kitchen table with a legal pad and began to write back.
“Dear Marcus, Your letter arrived at a curious time. I’ve recently discovered some family documents that cast new light on Constance and her relationship with your grandfather. I’m beginning to think our families share more than just history.”
She paused, pen hovering over paper. How much should she reveal? The letters in her drawer painted Constance as a murderess, but they also revealed a woman desperate for love, willing to risk everything for passion.
“I have reason to believe they were lovers, planning a future together that was cut short by tragedy. The mill fire of 1947 changed everything for both our families. But I suspect there’s more to the story than what made it into the newspapers.”
She sealed the letter before she could second-guess herself, walked to the mailbox in her nightgown, and dropped it in. The metal door clanged shut with finality.
Two days later, she found herself checking the mail twice a day, heart racing every time she saw the postal truck turn onto her street.
Marcus’s response came faster this time, the envelope thick with multiple pages. Vera tore it open standing beside her mailbox, the afternoon sun beating down on her shoulders.
“My dearest Vera, Your letter has left me sleepless. To think that you’ve found actual correspondence between them - it’s more than I dared hope for. But your mention of tragedy troubles me deeply. What exactly do you know about the mill fire?”
She walked slowly back to her house, reading as she went.
“My grandfather carried guilt about that night until his death. He would wake screaming sometimes, my grandmother told me, calling out Constance’s name and something about ‘the workers who weren’t supposed to be there.’ I always assumed it was survivor’s guilt, but your letter makes me wonder if there was something more deliberate about what happened.”
Vera’s stomach tightened. She paused on her front steps, key halfway to the lock.
“I’ve done some research of my own since receiving your letter. The insurance payout was substantial - three thousand dollars in 1947 money. Enough to disappear, start over somewhere new. But Constance never left Millhaven, did she? And my grandfather fled to Memphis the week after the fire, never to return.”
Inside, she poured herself bourbon instead of tea. Her hands shook as she read the rest.
“There’s something I need to tell you, Vera, though it shames me to write it. I’ve been searching for answers about that night for twenty years, ever since my grandfather’s deathbed confession. He told me he’d done something terrible for love, something that got innocent people killed. He made me promise to find the truth, to make it right somehow.”
The bourbon burned her throat. Outside, a mockingbird called from the magnolia tree.
“I’ve been carrying this burden alone for so long. Finding you feels like providence. Two grandchildren, carrying the sins of our elders, finally able to share the weight. Would it be too forward of me to say that I feel connected to you already? As if we’re the only two people in the world who can understand each other’s pain?”
Vera set down the glass and kept reading.
“I’m planning to visit Millhaven next month. There are records I need to see at the courthouse, and I’d very much like to meet you in person. But more than that, I want to see the mill ruins. I need to stand where it happened, to feel the weight of their choices in the place where everything went wrong.”
The letter concluded with a request that made her pulse quicken.
“Would you consider sharing those family documents with me? I know it’s asking a lot, trusting a stranger with such intimate family secrets. But I feel we’re past being strangers now. We’re co-conspirators in uncovering the truth, fellow travelers on a journey toward understanding.”
That evening, Vera spread Constance’s letters across her kitchen table and photographed each one with her phone. She printed the images at the drugstore the next morning, her hands trembling as the copies emerged from the machine.
She wrote her response that night, the bourbon making her bold.
“Dear Marcus, I’m enclosing copies of what I found. Reading them will be painful - they reveal our grandparents as people we never knew, capable of things we never imagined. But you’re right that we’re past being strangers. I find myself thinking about you at odd moments, wondering what you look like, how your voice sounds when you’re not on the phone talking about genealogy.”
She sealed the letter with the photographs inside, then walked to the mailbox in the darkness. The streetlights cast long shadows between the houses, and somewhere in the distance, a train whistle echoed across the Delta.
As she dropped the envelope through the slot, Vera wondered if she was making the same mistake Constance had made - trusting a man she barely knew with secrets that could destroy everything.
The metal door clanged shut, and there was no taking it back.
The basement flooded three inches that Tuesday morning, and Vera waded through the brown water in her rubber boots, salvaging what she could. The filing cabinets stood like islands in the murky tide, their bottom drawers submerged. She worked methodically, pulling folders from the water and laying them out on the metal shelving to dry.
That’s when she found the insurance file she’d never seen before, wedged behind a water pipe where it must have fallen years ago. “Hartford Insurance - Blackwater Mill - Policy 4471-B.”
Her boots squelched as she carried it to her desk. Inside, the original policy documents, water-stained but readable. The beneficiary section made her blood freeze.
“In the event of total loss, payment shall be made to mill owner Thomas Hutchins or his designated heir. Secondary beneficiary: Marcus Clay, grandson of deceased worker Robert Clay, address on file.”
Clay. Not Thorne.
She read it again, certain she’d misunderstood. But there it was in black ink on Hartford letterhead. Marcus Clay, listed as secondary beneficiary on a policy dated 1962 - fifteen years after the fire.
Her phone buzzed. A text message from an unknown number.
“Did you get my letter yet? I’m eager to hear your thoughts on the photographs. - M”
Vera stared at the screen. How did he have her cell phone number? She’d never given it to him.
Above her, footsteps crossed the courthouse floor. Deputy Morrison’s voice echoed down the stairwell.
“Vera? You all right down there? Heard about the flood.”
“Fine,” she called back, but her voice cracked. “Just cleaning up.”
She photographed the insurance documents with shaking hands, then tucked the file under a stack of tax records. The water lapped at her boots as she climbed the stairs to Morrison’s office.
“Need to use your computer,” she said. “Mine got wet.”
Morrison gestured to his desk. “Help yourself. I’ll be out on patrol.”
She waited until his cruiser pulled away, then searched for “Marcus Clay Mississippi genealogy.” The results made her stomach clench.
Marcus Clay, 34, currently residing in Memphis. Grandson of Robert Clay, deceased 1947 in the Blackwater Mill fire. According to a genealogy forum post from six months ago, he’d been “researching the suspicious circumstances surrounding his grandfather’s death and seeking contact with descendants of mill owner Thomas Hutchins.”
She scrolled down. Another post: “My grandfather was murdered for insurance money. I have proof. Looking for others who want justice.”
Her phone buzzed again.
“I’ve been thinking about you constantly. Is that strange to admit? I feel like we were meant to find each other. Like our grandparents’ story isn’t finished yet.”
Vera deleted the message without responding. She drove home through streets that suddenly felt foreign, checking her rearview mirror at every turn.
The latest letter from Marcus - from Marcus Clay - waited in her mailbox. She carried it inside unopened and poured three fingers of bourbon before breaking the seal.
“My darling Vera, The photographs you sent have shaken me to my core. To see my grandfather’s plan laid out in Constance’s handwriting, to know that she was complicit in what happened - it changes everything I thought I knew about that night.”
Her hands trembled as she read on.
“But what strikes me most is how much they truly loved each other. Even planning something so terrible, their passion comes through in every line. I find myself envying what they had, even as I’m horrified by what they did with it.”
The letter grew more intimate as it continued.
“I dream about meeting you, Vera. I imagine us standing together in the mill ruins at sunset, finally laying our families’ ghosts to rest. I picture your face in candlelight as we share dinner somewhere quiet, away from all the history and pain. Would you think me foolish if I said I’m already half in love with the woman who writes these letters?”
At the bottom, he’d included his phone number again. But now she knew it was a lie, like everything else.
She walked to her bedroom and pulled Constance’s original letters from the drawer. The passionate words that had once seemed romantic now read like evidence in a murder trial.
“Just be certain about the night watchman’s schedule.”
“Only Thomas will be there, doing his monthly inventory.”
But Robert Clay had been there too. And Miguel Santos. Marcus’s grandfather and a nineteen-year-old boy, both burned alive for three thousand dollars and a chance at freedom.
Vera sat at her kitchen table and began to write.
“Dear Marcus, I think it’s time we met in person. There’s something about our family history that can’t be discussed in letters. Something that requires looking each other in the eye.”
She sealed the letter before she could lose her nerve, then walked to the mailbox in the gathering dusk. The train whistle echoed across the Delta again, mournful and distant.
As she dropped the envelope into the slot, Vera wondered if she was walking into the same trap that had killed her great-uncle Thomas.
The metal door clanged shut like a coffin lid.
Marcus Clay’s reply came overnight, slipped under her door while she slept. Vera found it at dawn, her name written across cream paper in that familiar careful script.
“My beloved Vera, Yes. A thousand times yes. I’ve been aching to see your face, to hear your voice speak the words that have been flowing between us like lifeblood. Let’s meet where it all began - at the mill ruins on Saturday evening. Seven o’clock, when the light is golden and the air has cooled.”
She made coffee with trembling hands and read the rest standing at her kitchen window.
“I’ve rented a room above Paulette’s Bar on Commerce Street. Room 3B. The proprietor, Mrs. Guidry, tells me it’s the same building where my grandfather lived before the fire. Strange how these connections keep revealing themselves, as if the past is calling us home.”
The bourbon bottle on her counter caught the morning light. She’d been drinking more since the letters started, sleeping less. Her reflection in the kitchen window looked hollow-eyed and fragile.
“I have something to show you when we meet. Documents I’ve never shared with anyone. Evidence that will change how you see everything that happened that night. But more than that, I want to hold your hand and tell you that whatever our grandparents did, whatever sins we’ve inherited, it doesn’t have to define us.”
Vera dressed for work but drove instead to the mill ruins on Blackwater Road. The skeletal remains of the building rose from a field of kudzu and Queen Anne’s lace, brick walls standing like broken teeth against the morning sky. Scorch marks still darkened the eastern wall where three men had died.
She walked the perimeter, trying to imagine Constance and Thorne - and Marcus Clay - meeting here in secret. Planning. Plotting. The insurance policy would have made Robert Clay’s family wealthy if they’d known to claim it. Instead, it had sat in a courthouse file for seventy-five years while his grandson grew up poor and angry.
Her phone rang. Morrison’s number.
“Vera? Where are you? Deputy from Memphis called looking for you about twenty minutes ago.”
“What kind of deputy?”
“Detective named Rodriguez. Said they’re investigating harassment complaints filed by a woman named Sarah Chen. Something about threatening letters and identity theft. You know anything about that?”
Vera’s mouth went dry. “What did you tell him?”
“Told him you were the most honest person in Millhaven County. But he’s driving down this afternoon to talk to you. Wants to see you at the courthouse around three.”
She hung up and stood among the mill ruins, pieces of a larger puzzle clicking into place. Sarah Chen. Another woman, another correspondence, another family connection Marcus had manufactured. How many others had there been?
That afternoon, Detective Rodriguez spread photographs across her desk in the courthouse basement. Different women, different towns across Mississippi and Louisiana. All descendants of families connected to industrial fires, mining accidents, factory explosions from decades past.
“He targets women who work in records offices,” Rodriguez explained. “County clerks, archivists, genealogy researchers. Always the same pattern - historical research leads to romantic correspondence, then emotional manipulation.”
One photograph showed a woman about Vera’s age, dark-haired and serious. “Sarah Chen in Baton Rouge. Her great-grandfather died in a refinery explosion in 1952. Clay spent six months writing to her, convinced her they’d fallen in love through letters. When she finally agreed to meet him, he tried to extort money from her family, claiming they owed reparations for her ancestor’s role in the explosion.”
“What happened to her?”
“She’s alive. Barely. He left her tied up in an abandoned warehouse with evidence scattered around her body - photographs, documents, newspaper clippings. Made it look like she’d been researching the explosion obsessively, like she’d had a breakdown. If a security guard hadn’t found her…”
Rodriguez leaned forward. “He’s escalating, Miss Hutchins. Each case gets more violent. The woman before Sarah Chen didn’t survive.”
Vera stared at the photographs. Different faces, but she could see herself in each one - the same loneliness, the same hunger for connection that had made Marcus’s letters so intoxicating.
“He’s asked me to meet him tomorrow night. At the mill ruins.”
“No.” Rodriguez shook his head. “Absolutely not.”
“What if it’s the only way to stop him?”
“What if it gets you killed?”
That evening, Vera sat at her kitchen table and wrote what might be her final letter.
“Dear Marcus, I’ll be there tomorrow at seven. But I want you to know that I’ve discovered who you really are, what you’ve done to other women, why you chose me. I’m not Sarah Chen or the others. I won’t be your victim.”
She paused, pen hovering over paper.
“But I understand your rage, your need for justice. Our grandparents were murderers, and their victims deserve to be remembered. Maybe we can find another way to honor them, something that doesn’t end with more violence.”
She sealed the letter, then walked to her bedroom and pulled out the .38 revolver her father had given her years ago. She’d never fired it outside of a shooting range, but her hands remembered the weight of it, the way the cylinder clicked when she checked the chambers.
Six bullets. She hoped that would be enough.
The heat pressed down like a wet blanket as Vera walked the three blocks to Paulette’s Bar that evening. She’d told Rodriguez she was staying home, doors locked, but the pull of confrontation had proven stronger than caution. The .38 sat heavy in her purse, loaded and ready.
Paulette’s occupied the ground floor of a narrow brick building wedged between a pawn shop and a defunct beauty parlor. The neon sign in the window flickered between “Open” and darkness. Vera climbed the external staircase to the second floor, her footsteps echoing off the metal grating.
Room 3B’s door stood slightly ajar. She could hear movement inside - papers rustling, a chair creaking. She knocked.
“Come in, Vera.”
Marcus Clay sat at a small table covered with documents, his back to the window. He was younger than she’d expected, maybe thirty-five, with prematurely gray hair and the kind of lean build that suggested either careful diet or chronic stress. His eyes were Robert Clay’s eyes, she realized - pale blue and watchful.
“You’re not surprised to see me here instead of the mill,” she said.
“Should I be?” He gestured to the chair across from him. “You’re smarter than the others. I knew you’d figure it out eventually.”
The room smelled of bourbon and old wood. A bare bulb hanging from the ceiling cast harsh shadows across his face. On the table, she could see photographs of other women - Sarah Chen, faces she didn’t recognize, and her own driver’s license photo, somehow obtained.
“How many others have there been?”
“Does it matter?” Marcus poured bourbon into two glasses from a bottle on the windowsill. “They all had blood on their hands. Inherited wealth built on my grandfather’s bones, on Miguel Santos’s bones. Justice has many faces.”
“Sarah Chen’s great-grandfather died in an industrial accident. That’s not the same as murder.”
“Isn’t it?” His voice carried decades of carefully nurtured rage. “Unsafe working conditions, bribed inspectors, workers treated like disposable machinery. The methods change, but the crime stays the same - poor men dying to make rich men richer.”
Vera kept her purse close, feeling the weight of the gun inside. “What do you want from me, Marcus?”
He slid a document across the table. The Hartford Insurance policy she’d found in the flooded basement, but this copy was clean, unwater-damaged. “I want you to help me claim what’s rightfully mine. Three thousand dollars in 1947 is worth about forty thousand today, plus seventy-five years of interest. Your family owes mine approximately two hundred thousand dollars.”
“And if I refuse?”
Marcus smiled, and she saw something cold and predatory in his expression. “Then you’ll have an accident, just like the others. The mill ruins are dangerous at night - old foundations, unstable walls. Easy for someone to fall, hit their head, bleed out slowly while the crickets sing.”
“You killed them.”
“I gave them a choice. Pay restitution for their families’ crimes, or face the consequences. Sarah Chen chose poorly. So did Linda Broussard in Lafayette. So did Margaret White in Vicksburg.”
He pulled out a manila folder thick with photographs. Crime scene images, newspaper clippings, obituaries. Three women who’d trusted him, corresponded with him, fallen for the same romantic manipulation that had nearly ensnared Vera.
“You wrote beautiful letters to all of them.”
“I meant every word,” Marcus said, and she almost believed him. “That’s what made it so effective. I did love Sarah, in my way. I loved the idea of her, the symmetry of our connection. But love doesn’t erase debt.”
Outside, the sun was sinking toward the horizon. Golden light slanted through the window, painting everything amber. In an hour, he would expect her at the mill ruins. In an hour, Detective Rodriguez would realize she’d lied to him and send patrol cars looking for her.
“There’s another way,” Vera said. “We could expose the truth together. Hold a press conference, show the world what really happened that night. Your grandfather and Miguel Santos would be remembered as victims, not just statistics.”
“Public vindication doesn’t pay for my grandfather’s lost wages. Doesn’t compensate for the childhood I spent in poverty while your family lived comfortable lives on insurance money.”
Marcus stood and walked to the window. His back was turned, hands clasped behind him. Vera slipped her hand into her purse and found the gun’s grip.
“Besides,” he continued, “I’ve grown to enjoy the correspondence. There’s something pure about it - two people revealing their souls through handwritten words. It’s the closest thing to honest intimacy I’ve ever experienced.”
“Even when it’s built on lies?”
“All intimacy is built on lies, Vera. The only difference is whether you admit it.”
He turned back toward her, and she saw that he was holding a revolver of his own - older than hers, but well-maintained. “Now, shall we walk to the mill together? I think it’s time our families’ story reached its proper conclusion.”
The bourbon sat untouched between them as the golden light faded toward dusk.
They walked side by side down Commerce Street like lovers heading to a rendezvous, but Vera could feel the gun’s barrel pressed against her ribs through Marcus’s jacket. The evening air hung thick with the promise of rain, and Spanish moss swayed from the oak trees like funeral shrouds.
“Tell me about the letters,” she said as they turned onto Blackwater Road. “The ones you wrote to Sarah Chen. Did you really mean what you said about loving her?”
“Why does it matter now?”
“Because I need to understand. You’re going to kill me anyway - at least let me know if any of it was real.”
Marcus was quiet for a long moment, his grip on the gun never wavering. “Sarah collected antique dolls. She mentioned it in her third letter - how she’d inherited her grandmother’s collection, these beautiful porcelain faces that never aged, never changed. When I wrote back about finding perfection in things that couldn’t disappoint you, I was thinking about those dolls.”
They passed the old cotton gin, its rusted machinery visible through broken windows. A barn owl called from somewhere in the darkness.
“She sent me a photograph of herself holding one of them. This delicate thing in a blue dress, with Sarah’s face right next to it. Both of them so breakable. That’s when I knew I loved her.”
“But you killed her anyway.”
“Love and justice aren’t mutually exclusive, Vera. Sometimes they demand the same sacrifice.”
The mill ruins appeared ahead of them, black against the darkening sky. Marcus guided her off the road and through the tall grass toward the collapsed eastern wall. Her feet caught on broken concrete and twisted metal, remnants of the machinery that had once turned raw cotton into profit.
“Right here,” Marcus said, stopping beside a section of wall still marked with scorch stains. “This is where they found my grandfather’s body. Robert Clay, forty-two years old, burned alive for three thousand dollars.”
Vera looked at the blackened bricks and tried to imagine that September night in 1947. Constance and Thorne setting their fires, thinking they were alone. The workers who weren’t supposed to be there, trapped by flames and falling timber.
“Miguel Santos was nineteen,” she said. “Just a kid.”
“I know. I’ve visited his grave in Natchez. His family never had money for a proper headstone - just a wooden cross that rotted away decades ago. No one remembers his name now except me.”
Marcus pulled the gun from his jacket and pointed it at her chest. In the fading light, his face looked carved from stone. “But they’ll remember it tomorrow, when the newspapers write about what happened here tonight. How the descendants of the mill fire met at the ruins to settle old debts.”
“Rodriguez knows where I am. He’ll find your letters, trace everything back to you.”
“I’m counting on it. Twenty years I’ve been planning this, Vera. Twenty years of research and patience and careful preparation. You think I didn’t plan for the police?”
Thunder rumbled in the distance, and the first fat drops of rain began to fall. Marcus gestured toward a section of fallen wall. “Sit down. I want to read you something before we finish this.”
Vera sat on the broken concrete, rain speckling her dress. Marcus pulled a folded paper from his pocket - cream-colored, like all his letters.
“I wrote this last night,” he said. “My final letter to you, though you’ll never read it yourself.”
He cleared his throat and began to read by the light of his phone.
“My dearest Vera, by the time anyone finds this, our correspondence will have reached its natural conclusion. I want you to know that every word I wrote to you was true, even the lies. Especially the lies. We found something real in those letters, something our grandparents would have recognized - love twisted up with violence, passion indistinguishable from revenge.”
Lightning flickered across the sky, illuminating the ruins in stark black and white. Vera’s hand crept toward her purse, but Marcus was watching her too carefully.
“You were the best of them,” he continued reading. “Sarah was too trusting, Linda too desperate, Margaret too angry. But you matched me word for word, thought for thought. In another life, another century, we might have built something beautiful together.”
The rain was falling harder now, turning the red clay beneath their feet to mud. Vera’s dress clung to her skin, and her hair hung in wet strings around her face.
“But beautiful things don’t pay debts, and the dead don’t forgive. My grandfather calls to me from this ground, demands justice that only blood can satisfy. I’m sorry it has to be your blood, Vera. I’m sorry we couldn’t find another way.”
Marcus folded the letter and put it back in his pocket. “Any last words? Something I can add to the ending?”
Vera looked at him through the rain, this man who had written her love letters while planning her murder, who had shown her more intimacy in three weeks than she’d found in years of living.
“Just one thing,” she said. “The insurance policy you showed me - it was a fake, wasn’t it? Your grandfather was never listed as a beneficiary.”
Marcus smiled, rain streaming down his face. “Very good. Yes, I forged it. But the principle remains the same.”
“And the other women - they didn’t refuse to pay. They never had the chance.”
“Also correct.”
Vera felt something cold settle in her chest, colder than the rain. “So none of this was ever about justice. It was just murder.”
“Justice,” Marcus said, raising the gun. “Murder. Love. Revenge. In the end, they’re all just words on paper.”
The thunder crashed overhead as he pulled the trigger.
The click of the hammer on an empty chamber echoed through the rain like a broken promise. Marcus stared at his gun in disbelief, pulled the trigger again. Another hollow click.
Vera rolled sideways behind the fallen wall section as Marcus frantically checked his cylinder. She pulled the .38 from her purse, hands slick with rain and fear.
“Looking for these?” She held up six bullets, brass cartridges gleaming in the lightning. “I found your room this afternoon while you were getting dinner. Amazing how trusting Mrs. Guidry is with her spare keys.”
Marcus threw the useless gun aside and lunged toward her. Vera scrambled backward through the mud and broken concrete, her finger finding the trigger of her own weapon.
“Don’t,” she warned. “I will shoot you.”
He stopped, breathing hard, rain plastering his gray hair to his skull. “You won’t. You’re not a killer, Vera. That’s what makes you different from the others.”
“The others weren’t facing a man who murdered three women.”
“Four,” Marcus corrected. “There was another one before Sarah. Rebecca Morrison in Jackson. Detective Rodriguez doesn’t know about her yet.”
Thunder rolled across the Delta, and the rain turned into a proper storm. Water streamed through the mill ruins, carrying away decades of accumulated debris. Vera kept the gun trained on Marcus’s chest as she reached for her phone.
No signal. Of course.
“You can’t call for help,” Marcus said, reading her expression. “And you can’t just leave me here - I’ll follow you home, finish what I started. So what’s your plan, Vera? Shoot me in cold blood? Become the killer you claim I am?”
“Self-defense isn’t murder.”
“Tell that to the newspapers. Tell that to Detective Rodriguez when he finds my body and reads my letters. ‘Local Woman Executes Unarmed Man in Mill Ruins.’ Think that won’t make headlines?”
Vera wiped rain from her eyes with her free hand. The gun was getting heavy, harder to hold steady. “You killed four women. You were going to kill me.”
“But I didn’t. My gun was empty - no crime committed. Just two people having a conversation in the rain.”
“You confessed. I heard everything.”
Marcus laughed, the sound echoing off the broken walls. “Your word against mine. And I’ll say you lured me here, threatened me with that gun, tried to extort money from me based on some fantasy about our families’ history.”
Lightning illuminated his face, and she saw something calculating in his expression. He was working through possibilities, planning his next move even with a gun pointed at his heart.
“Besides,” he continued, “shooting me doesn’t bring back Sarah Chen or the others. Doesn’t undo what your great-aunt Constance did to my grandfather. All it does is add another body to the count.”
“Then what do you suggest?”
“A trade,” Marcus said. “Information for freedom. I tell you where to find evidence that will convict me for the murders - photographs, documents, trophies I kept from each woman. You let me walk away from here alive.”
“And then what? You disappear, start over somewhere else, kill more women?”
“Maybe. Or maybe I’m tired of carrying my grandfather’s ghost. Maybe twenty years of revenge is enough.”
The rain was lessening now, settling into a steady drizzle that turned the mill ruins into a dripping cathedral. Vera’s arms ached from holding the gun, and her finger was getting numb on the trigger.
“The evidence,” she said. “Where is it?”
“Storage unit in Memphis. Unit 247 at Riverside Self Storage. Key’s in my room at Paulette’s, taped under the bathroom sink. Everything you need to close four murder cases and give those women’s families some peace.”
“And in exchange?”
“Ten minutes. That’s all I ask. Ten minutes to walk away from here before you call the police.”
Vera stared at him through the rain, this man who had written her love letters while planning her death. Part of her wanted to pull the trigger, to end his story the way he’d ended so many others. But another part - the part that had fallen for his words, that had believed in the possibility of connection even built on lies - hesitated.
“You really loved them,” she said. “Sarah and the others. In your own twisted way.”
“Does it matter?”
“It matters to me.”
Marcus nodded slowly. “Yes. I loved them all. That’s what made killing them so perfect.”
The admission hit her like a physical blow. Whatever mercy she’d been considering evaporated in the rain-soaked darkness.
“Then this is for them,” Vera said, and pulled the trigger.
The gunshot cracked across the Delta like breaking thunder.
Marcus staggered backward, clutching his shoulder where the bullet had torn through muscle and bone. Blood seeped between his fingers, dark against his white shirt. He looked at Vera with something that might have been admiration.
“You missed my heart on purpose.”
“I’m not you,” she said, keeping the gun steady. “Sit down before you bleed out.”
He sank onto a chunk of broken foundation, pressing his good hand against the wound. “Why? You had every reason to kill me.”
“Because Sarah Chen and the others deserve justice, not revenge. There’s a difference, even if you never learned it.”
Vera pulled out her phone. Still no signal, but the rain was stopping. She could see lights in the distance - the courthouse, the main road, civilization. “I’m going to walk to where I can call 911. You’re going to sit here and bleed and think about what you’ve done.”
“I’ll run.”
“With a shattered shoulder? In this mud? You wouldn’t make it a hundred yards.”
Marcus leaned back against the mill wall, the same scorched bricks where his grandfather had died. “You know what the funny thing is? I really did fall in love with you through those letters. All of you - Sarah, Linda, Margaret, Rebecca. The correspondence was the only honest thing I ever did.”
“Honest? You built it all on lies.”
“The feelings were real. The connection was real. Everything else was just… details.”
Vera stepped backward, keeping the gun trained on him. “The storage unit key - is that real too?”
“Under the bathroom sink, just like I said. You’ll find photographs of all four women, copies of every letter I wrote them, souvenirs I took. Rebecca’s wedding ring, Sarah’s antique doll, Linda’s grandmother’s Bible. Everything Rodriguez needs to close the cases.”
“Why tell me the truth now?”
Marcus looked up at her through the gathering darkness. Blood had soaked the front of his shirt, and his face was pale with shock. “Because this is how the story ends, Vera. Not with me disappearing into the night, not with you shooting me in cold blood. With both of us finally being honest about what we are.”
“What are we?”
“Two lonely people who found each other through letters and lies. Two people carrying our families’ sins like stones in our pockets. Two people who might have loved each other if we’d met under different stars.”
Vera backed away through the ruins, her feet splashing in puddles that reflected the scattered stars. “Goodbye, Marcus.”
“Wait.” His voice was getting weaker. “One more thing. Check the last folder in the storage unit. The one marked ‘Vera Hutchins.’ I’ve been writing to you longer than you know.”
She paused. “What do you mean?”
“Christmas cards. Birthday cards. Anonymous notes slipped under your door over the past two years. I’ve been watching you, learning about you, falling in love with the idea of you long before I made contact. That’s how I knew you’d be perfect - you were already lonely enough to need what I was offering.”
The revelation hit her like ice water. All those cards she’d thought were from secret admirers, all those moments when she’d felt mysteriously cared for - it had been Marcus, circling her like a predator, preparing his trap.
“You’re sick.”
“I’m thorough,” he said, and even wounded and bleeding, there was pride in his voice. “Sarah Chen got three months of correspondence. You got two years. That’s how much I loved you.”
Vera turned and walked away through the broken mill machinery, through the tall grass and back toward the road. Behind her, she could hear Marcus calling her name, his voice growing fainter with distance and blood loss.
At the road, her phone finally found a signal. She dialed 911 with shaking fingers.
“911, what’s your emergency?”
“This is Vera Hutchins. I’m at the Blackwater Mill ruins on Mill Road. I’ve shot a man who was trying to kill me. He’s wounded but alive. Send ambulances and police.”
“Ma’am, are you injured?”
Vera looked back toward the ruins, where Marcus Clay lay bleeding among the ghosts of his grandfather and three innocent workers and four murdered women. “I don’t know,” she said. “I honestly don’t know.”
The dispatcher’s voice crackled through static as sirens began to wail in the distance, racing through the Delta night toward the place where love and violence had finally learned to tell the difference between themselves.
“Stay on the line, ma’am. Help is on the way.”
But Vera was already walking home through the rain-washed streets, carrying the weight of Marcus’s letters in her memory and the smell of gunpowder on her hands.
The storage unit key was exactly where Marcus had said it would be, taped under the bathroom sink in room 3B. Detective Rodriguez found it three days later, along with Marcus’s typewriter, boxes of cream-colored stationery, and a half-finished letter addressed to someone named Catherine Moreau in Shreveport.
Vera sat in the courthouse basement, now pumped dry and smelling of industrial disinfectant, as Rodriguez spread the contents of storage unit 247 across her desk. Photographs of four dead women. Love letters written in Marcus’s careful script. And in the final folder, marked “Vera Hutchins,” two years’ worth of cards and notes that had made her feel mysteriously cherished.
“He’s alive,” Rodriguez said. “Lost a lot of blood, but he’ll survive to stand trial. Says he wants to confess to everything, make a full statement. Keeps asking if you’ll visit him in the hospital.”
“No.”
“Didn’t think so.” Rodriguez picked up one of the Christmas cards Marcus had sent her anonymously. Inside, he’d written “Thinking of you during this season of reflection. From someone who understands loneliness.”
“Two years,” Vera said. “He was planning this for two years.”
“Maybe longer. We found genealogy research dating back to 2018. He’d identified dozens of potential targets - women descended from families connected to industrial accidents, fires, mining disasters. You were just the one he chose to focus on.”
Outside, September was fading into October, and the leaves on the courthouse square maples were turning gold. Vera had taken a week off work after the shooting, but the basement felt like the only place where she could think clearly. Surrounded by the county’s paper history, she could almost convince herself that Marcus Clay was just another file to be catalogued and stored away.
“The other families,” she said. “Sarah Chen’s parents, the others - they deserve to know what happened.”
“They will. Trial’s set for January. Clay’s lawyer says he’ll plead guilty, but the families want their day in court. Want to hear him explain why he did it.”
Rodriguez packed the evidence back into boxes. “You know what I can’t figure out? The mill fire really happened. Your great-aunt and his grandfather really were involved. So why forge the insurance documents? Why not just tell the truth?”
Vera had been wondering the same thing. “Because the truth wasn’t enough. The real story was complicated - Constance and Thorne were lovers planning to run away together, but they weren’t planning to kill anyone. The workers were supposed to be gone that night. It was arson, but not murder.”
“And Marcus needed it to be murder.”
“He needed villains. Heroes and villains, black and white, debts that could be paid in blood. The truth was too messy for the story he wanted to tell.”
After Rodriguez left, Vera sat alone in the basement with the last letter Marcus had written to her - the one he’d tried to read in the mill ruins before the gun failed to fire. She’d found it on his body while waiting for the ambulances, blood-stained and rain-soaked but still readable.
“My dearest Vera,” it began, “by the time anyone finds this, our correspondence will have reached its natural conclusion.”
She read it through to the end, all his justifications and declarations of twisted love, then fed it into the document shredder beside her desk. The machine chewed it into confetti, reducing Marcus’s final words to strips of meaningless paper.
That evening, she drove to the mill ruins one last time. The place looked different in daylight - smaller, less threatening. Just broken walls and rusted machinery, weeds growing through the cracks in the foundation. In a few years, the kudzu would claim it completely, and no one would remember that people had died here.
She pulled Constance’s original letters from her purse - the real ones, not Marcus’s copies. She’d kept them through everything, these passionate declarations that had started it all. Evidence of love twisted into something destructive, desire that had killed three innocent men.
Vera tore them up page by page, letting the pieces scatter in the October wind. Constance’s secrets, Thorne’s promises, the whole bloody inheritance - she gave it all back to the Delta air.
Her phone buzzed. A text from an unknown number.
“I hope you can forgive me someday. What we had was real, even if everything else was lies. - M”
She deleted the message without responding, then blocked the number. Whatever Marcus Clay wanted to say to her, whatever final manipulations he was planning from his hospital bed, she was done listening.
On the drive home, Vera stopped at the post office and rented a new box. She was thinking about writing letters again - real ones this time, to real people. Maybe her cousin in Atlanta, maybe the old friend from college who kept sending Facebook messages she never answered.
The postal clerk handed her the keys to box 447, and Vera signed her name on the rental agreement. Clean paper, honest signatures, correspondence built on truth instead of lies.
Outside, the train whistle echoed across the Delta, calling to some distant destination where the past couldn’t follow and letters meant only what they said.
She drove home through streets that felt like her own again, carrying nothing but the weight of tomorrow’s possibilities and the satisfaction of a story finally finished.
The mill ruins disappeared in her rearview mirror, and somewhere in the courthouse basement, the filing cabinets waited patiently for Monday morning and whatever new mysteries the county’s residents would bring to be catalogued, stored away, and eventually forgotten.